* Redo the intro for Susan Lesley à she has to sound nervous.
* Introduction of Lucas à over the shoulder shot. Side view – Shadow over his face.
* Redo greeting à keep Lucas mysterious à his voice – high angle.
* Redo/improve open doorà start from the door way à 180* degrees opens door.
* Film through mirror à 2x see Lucas/side face à cut into a close up of Susan.
* Redo eye-point-of-view of Lucas’s watch.
* Add extra sceneà faint scene – start with head on hands.
* From Kettle à cut to cup – swap sugar for powder.
* Close up of Susan’s eyes opening.
* Cut to fast shots of cuts and bruises.
* Forward tracking of Lucas walking to Susan.
* Medium shot of Lucas – saying: Do you remember me?
* Reverse tracking of Louise running.
* Cut to cuts and bruises. à End with a close up of Susan’s face.
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